Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Take Back

the knitting needles click
                                     click
                                             click

strands wrapping around each other
                                                      other
                                                              other

shaping a seamless net, perfect to catch
                                                            catch
                                                                    catch

the words I so wish to take back
                                                   back
                                                           back
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4 comments:

  1. CiaraApril 20, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    Interesting. I so can't write poetry. :) I can knit though. LOL

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  2. TrishaApril 20, 2011 at 8:19 PM

    Loving your writing Brooke! You're a great poet as well as story writer!

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  3. Brooke R. BusseApril 20, 2011 at 8:24 PM

    Thank you both. I think I'm starting to run out of steam and there's still ten days left. I just have to think a little harder.

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  4. Theresa MilsteinJuly 9, 2011 at 8:45 PM

    Started off reminding me of my grandmother crocheting, but then it turned into something else.

    How many times have we wished to take back our words?

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