CRANK
wiggles,
excited that
the show is
about to start
music fills the
safety walls
and the shapes
start to
dance
round
and
Round and
ROUND
For some reason, I really, really, really love the last round. I love the format for this poem, too. ^__^
ReplyDeleteThanks, I modeled it around a baby's undeveloped thought process if that makes any sense.
ReplyDeleteInteresting...one can do so many things with writing!
ReplyDeleteDuncan In Kuantan
I either love this poem or hate it. I'll get back to you when I decide.
ReplyDeletelol Okay. I wait in anticipation.
ReplyDeleteLove the creativity! :)
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