Monday, April 04, 2011

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crank

 CRANK
wiggles,

                excited that

the show is


                                about to start


music fills the
safety walls
and the shapes
start to
                dance

round
                and

                Round and
ROUND

6 comments:

  1. For some reason, I really, really, really love the last round. I love the format for this poem, too. ^__^

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  2. Thanks, I modeled it around a baby's undeveloped thought process if that makes any sense.

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  3. Interesting...one can do so many things with writing!

    Duncan In Kuantan

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  4. I either love this poem or hate it. I'll get back to you when I decide.

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