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I love this. Powerful. People should judge less, and let be more.
ReplyDeleteThe size comparison between the words is amazing "Else And Courtney 4EVER" of course standing out at the center of the heart? Or is it two souls entwined? I could spend hours analyzing this. Genius.
ReplyDeleteI spent forever trying to figure out where to start. I'm such a genius. . . start in the middle. xD This poem is too cool! I especially loved the "who are you to tell me it's unnatural when her soul fits so perfectly in mine?" Awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks to all three of you. I'm really glad you like it because I spent ages making sure the formatting was correct. XD
ReplyDelete@Theresa I don't get why people think they have the right to make a law stating others can't get married. I mean, are you God? It just doesn't comprehend in my mind, no matter how hard I think about it.
@Michael I love it when people give me way more credit than I'm due. XD Really, I was just picturing a heart scratched into a tree trunk and all the things that go behind that, especially for a couple few can appreciate.
@Madeline I was afraid of that. I thought about leaving a note... But I'm glad you figured it out. ^^
I love this Brooke! Good job :)
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