Saturday, April 20, 2013

and... her iii.

that night
on our road trip
when you told me
to count
each bright light
as a moment
you would love me
I counted
flashing lights
more than once


  1. Hmm. Flashing lights makes me think that they are being chased by the police. But I don't think that's what you intended? Or maybe they are on the lam and desperately speeding away so each moment counts because soon it will be over!

    1. lol Michael, I always love to hear your thoughts on my poems. You always see them so differently than I do. I'm sorry I kind of failed at posting them this year. :/

      But really, the flashing lights are just like cell-phone towers and things. You know, so airplanes can see them at night.