Monday, April 04, 2011

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crank

 CRANK
wiggles,

                excited that

the show is


                                about to start


music fills the
safety walls
and the shapes
start to
                dance

round
                and

                Round and
ROUND
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 4, 2011 at 10:19 PM

    For some reason, I really, really, really love the last round. I love the format for this poem, too. ^__^

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  2. Brooke R. BusseApril 4, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    Thanks, I modeled it around a baby's undeveloped thought process if that makes any sense.

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  3. Duncan D. Horne - the Kuantan bloggerApril 5, 2011 at 2:46 AM

    Interesting...one can do so many things with writing!

    Duncan In Kuantan

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  4. Michael Offutt, Phantom ReaderApril 5, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    I either love this poem or hate it. I'll get back to you when I decide.

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  5. Brooke R. BusseApril 5, 2011 at 4:03 PM

    lol Okay. I wait in anticipation.

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  6. CiaraApril 5, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    Love the creativity! :)

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