Saturday, April 28, 2012

Giving Up

they lie
when they say
you shouldn't give up

if I hadn't given up
on keeping my love
I wouldn't have you

2 comments:

  1. I had to read that again 'cause I got confused! So... the "love" you're talking about isn't the same person as the "you" in the last sentence?

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    1. When I say love, I mean the actual feeling. As in she's keeping her feelings of love to herself.

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