Wednesday, April 30, 2014

unexpected turbulence

sometimes
I’m not sure
whether you’re
the heavy winds
or the eye
of my hurricane

4 comments:

  1. Very nice poem, seems to suggest a lot going on under the surface for the narrator but done in just a few words, impressive.

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    1. Thank you, Nick. ^^ I've found that I really enjoy writing this kind of poem-short and packed with meaning.

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  2. I've read all of the poems for April and I am still amazed by the amount of talent in that little package named...Brooke.

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