Wednesday, April 30, 2014

unexpected turbulence

sometimes
I’m not sure
whether you’re
the heavy winds
or the eye
of my hurricane
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  1. Nick WilfordMay 1, 2014 at 6:41 AM

    Very nice poem, seems to suggest a lot going on under the surface for the narrator but done in just a few words, impressive.

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    1. Brooke R. BusseMay 4, 2014 at 9:47 AM

      Thank you, Nick. ^^ I've found that I really enjoy writing this kind of poem-short and packed with meaning.

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  2. UnknownMay 6, 2014 at 1:22 PM

    I've read all of the poems for April and I am still amazed by the amount of talent in that little package named...Brooke.

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