tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post6060388618717662803..comments2023-10-11T05:06:04.185-05:00Comments on Paper Mountain: Prompt #32: Any moment now, he's going to press the button. Are the cameras rolling?Brooke R. Bussehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-91433342218525446232011-09-01T19:33:47.305-05:002011-09-01T19:33:47.305-05:00Especially my Chrysalis stories right? -winks- Hav...Especially <i>my</i> Chrysalis stories right? -winks- Have you managed to read my last story yet?Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-30901538527460849722011-09-01T02:34:18.121-05:002011-09-01T02:34:18.121-05:00I read it!! :) Very cool, love the tension. Icky e...I read it!! :) Very cool, love the tension. Icky ending, but hey I've come to expect those from Chrysalis stories. heheTrishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-85713818573553103852011-08-31T21:27:12.333-05:002011-08-31T21:27:12.333-05:00@Izzy Thank you. ^^ And I can't wait to go ove...@Izzy Thank you. ^^ And I can't wait to go over to your blog and read your post about your new idea!<br /><br />@Sarah lol Lovely. And what are you doing here? I thought you said you had writing to get done. -puts on suspicious face-<br /><br />@Michelle I know. I've been doing this for weeks (35 to be exact, I'm a <i>little</i> behind) and I'm still amazed what one little sentence or two can trigger.<br /><br />@Michael I do tend to write better in third person, I think. It never hurts to practice though. You know that's totally what I thought of when I was writing 'Red'. XD<br /><br />@David Well, that's very nice of you and hi back. ^^ Thanks for the complete and yay! I have voice.<br /><br />@Jess I'll be stopping by your blog soon (probably this weekend). Thank you so much for stopping by and following. And thank you for your comments too. -blushes-<br /><br />@Marlena hehe You're talking like Abby now. Little one word sentences. Hmm... still wondering why I didn't slip her name in there.Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-46202161617109820452011-08-31T19:20:21.007-05:002011-08-31T19:20:21.007-05:00Oh wow. That's all I can say. Wow. Intense....Oh wow. That's all I can say. Wow. Intense. Terrifying. Sad. Beautiful.Elisa DeLanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06466740168508428362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-29165052658372993752011-08-31T17:27:32.220-05:002011-08-31T17:27:32.220-05:00Hey I'm a campaigner too! I found your super a...Hey I'm a campaigner too! I found your super awesome blog in the poetry group! By the way, I'm a new follower and look foreword to reading more of your posts!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-72791472238051176892011-08-31T16:42:29.967-05:002011-08-31T16:42:29.967-05:00Hello, fellow campaigner! I'm not in your grou...Hello, fellow campaigner! I'm not in your group (but I am a YA author), but I still wanted to check out your blog and say, "HI!"<br /><br />That was awesome. Great voice! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-55083081114890257602011-08-31T11:22:11.433-05:002011-08-31T11:22:11.433-05:00I liked the other one about the two sisters better...I liked the other one about the two sisters better. But this one has a lot of good tension. When he pressed the red button though...you should have ended there and had a big voice that said "That was easy!"<br /><br />Get it? har har.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-70887620980749654392011-08-31T10:59:20.684-05:002011-08-31T10:59:20.684-05:00Wow, thank you so much for sharing this, Brooke. I...Wow, thank you so much for sharing this, Brooke. It never fails to awe me what powerful writing can come from a prompt.Michelle Fayardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05323853315988838877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-18016691727443524082011-08-31T01:26:46.358-05:002011-08-31T01:26:46.358-05:00Oh what a horrible ending - I love it!Oh what a horrible ending - I love it!Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-21629757211967369992011-08-30T23:31:58.832-05:002011-08-30T23:31:58.832-05:00I love your stories, Brooke!I love your stories, Brooke!Isabellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16881523588133382569noreply@blogger.com