tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post1418950256162583525..comments2023-10-11T05:06:04.185-05:00Comments on Paper Mountain: A 92 Word Story - Second Crusader ChallengeBrooke R. Bussehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-40964892911283573942011-08-06T05:59:05.928-05:002011-08-06T05:59:05.928-05:00Aaack! Poor humans! The second crusader group ha...Aaack! Poor humans! The second crusader group had the same challenge. I read most of them at the time. I think yours is still one of the best.Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-20742277803915618972011-03-29T21:19:56.572-05:002011-03-29T21:19:56.572-05:00Ooo, congrats Brooke! That's awesome :DOoo, congrats Brooke! That's awesome :DTrishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-30698974271449992132011-03-29T21:12:32.750-05:002011-03-29T21:12:32.750-05:00Really?! You don't know how big I'm smilin...Really?! You don't know how big I'm smiling right now. I'm never going to be able to get to sleep. lol ^^Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-12044292541035281042011-03-29T20:50:58.731-05:002011-03-29T20:50:58.731-05:00Follow-up post to let you know that your entry is ...Follow-up post to let you know that your entry is in the final round. Rachael will be announcing the winner next week.Callie Leuckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09535505792102190920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-70606799105511377732011-03-29T20:41:48.765-05:002011-03-29T20:41:48.765-05:00Hello. I'm helping Rachael Harrie judge this c...Hello. I'm helping Rachael Harrie judge this contest. I'm posting to let you know that your entry has been shortlisted as one of the top 5 in the judging round. Great job!Callie Leuckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09535505792102190920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-45310730062062551542011-03-26T11:56:23.290-05:002011-03-26T11:56:23.290-05:00I'm glad Giants seem to be a big source of int...I'm glad Giants seem to be a big source of interest. It gives me hope for my WIP. XD<br /><br />And yet again, I thank you all.Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-30823168889127300332011-03-26T11:33:44.915-05:002011-03-26T11:33:44.915-05:00Oh boy. It's interesting to see a darker take ...Oh boy. It's interesting to see a darker take on the prompt. You packed a lot in to such a little space!Bess Weatherbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09873091527596352004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-10716706185736624932011-03-26T06:37:28.548-05:002011-03-26T06:37:28.548-05:00Wow. Very interesting. I really like your take on ...Wow. Very interesting. I really like your take on this!Alison Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12179538085536841348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-28510930353734250772011-03-25T19:39:45.055-05:002011-03-25T19:39:45.055-05:00I like the giant child idea. Feel bad for the folk...I like the giant child idea. Feel bad for the folks though. Hopefully he doesn't step on them!KM Nallehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06714392426676743868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-83609690985325104992011-03-24T16:26:41.552-05:002011-03-24T16:26:41.552-05:00Love this one. Reversal of position. THe humans li...Love this one. Reversal of position. THe humans live in the goldfish bowl. Who are they and how did they get there? Inquiring minds want to know. Great job.jkraus8464https://www.blogger.com/profile/15138306757339514666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-71288040948761164852011-03-24T10:35:49.748-05:002011-03-24T10:35:49.748-05:00Ooh, that's clever!Ooh, that's clever!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06181241692016438730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-80173872321280904722011-03-24T06:54:38.935-05:002011-03-24T06:54:38.935-05:00I must be evil because this story made me laugh :)...I must be evil because this story made me laugh :)<br /><br />Great story!Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05519691494230856599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-37885958290183593942011-03-23T17:06:33.593-05:002011-03-23T17:06:33.593-05:00Yes, I'm always wondering what the bug feels l...Yes, I'm always wondering what the bug feels like when it gets squished. -shudders-<br /><br />Thanks again to all of you. ^^Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-11523852527248566102011-03-23T13:04:47.686-05:002011-03-23T13:04:47.686-05:00First time I've read about a goldfish bowl tha...First time I've read about a goldfish bowl that didn't have any water or fish in it.<br /><br />Nice writing "outside the bowl."Holly Vancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113438267020711966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-71857661723389739782011-03-23T11:12:23.011-05:002011-03-23T11:12:23.011-05:00Love the unique take. Very fun.Love the unique take. Very fun.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-19027344863059988472011-03-23T10:26:49.007-05:002011-03-23T10:26:49.007-05:00Haha! I was picturing my kids' reactions when ...Haha! I was picturing my kids' reactions when I want them to take the toad/snail/lizard/cricket/earthworm out of the house. Priceless!<br /><br />So sorry I haven't been following you all this time, fellow Crusader. Every time I think I've visited everyone, I discover another wonderful blog I missed. My error is rectified now!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-92207136418088353032011-03-23T05:13:44.770-05:002011-03-23T05:13:44.770-05:00Ooh! I shouldn't laugh, but LOL :) Great post....Ooh! I shouldn't laugh, but LOL :) Great post.<br /><br />Hugs,<br /><br />RachRachael Harriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764930101064527321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-3763879695646194862011-03-23T00:56:53.305-05:002011-03-23T00:56:53.305-05:00Holy crap! I wonder if that's what little bugs...Holy crap! I wonder if that's what little bugs think when I make my daughter take them back outside (she's always carrying in worms, and spiders in jars--drives me crazy).<br /><br />Okay, I'll be more careful when dumping them out. <br /><br />Very good, Brooke. And thank you for the award. What a sweetheart!<br /><br />~AngelaAngela Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488555961691093024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-694990254559810232011-03-23T00:13:40.519-05:002011-03-23T00:13:40.519-05:00*shudders* Second giant take on this flash fiction...*shudders* Second giant take on this flash fiction challenge I've read. Giants freak me out! Haha! Maybe that's why I am so sympathetic to bugs and spiders, I'm the type to go out of my way to rescue them. Lol! Great job!Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-37594170103003556862011-03-22T02:58:29.825-05:002011-03-22T02:58:29.825-05:00Great idea. Makes me feel sorry for the spiders I ...Great idea. Makes me feel sorry for the spiders I occasionally wash down the drain. (in my defence, there are limited options when you're in the shower!)Cally Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08313803959936813426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-50345998098527695562011-03-21T22:01:47.393-05:002011-03-21T22:01:47.393-05:00This is awesome - I love it but I feel sorry for t...This is awesome - I love it but I feel sorry for the people. lolTrishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-54672838161281278482011-03-21T21:10:41.371-05:002011-03-21T21:10:41.371-05:00Wow- very different take- I like it!Wow- very different take- I like it!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-22161353100110052182011-03-21T17:01:05.253-05:002011-03-21T17:01:05.253-05:00I'm so glad that everyone likes it. ^^ Gives m...I'm so glad that everyone likes it. ^^ Gives me a nice confidence boost, and who couldn't use one of those?Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-44569550023634311172011-03-21T16:13:39.700-05:002011-03-21T16:13:39.700-05:00Ohhhh - I like it. Makes me feel a little bad for ...Ohhhh - I like it. Makes me feel a little bad for all those goldfish I flushed as a kid =)Sierra Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16364930724666386832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-17426618658570126692011-03-21T15:58:45.773-05:002011-03-21T15:58:45.773-05:00Entertaining and different. The giant child sounde...Entertaining and different. The giant child sounded no more horrible than various human children I have known.Ben Langhinrichshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16077213274836551992noreply@blogger.com