tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post1490047044891002571..comments2023-10-11T05:06:04.185-05:00Comments on Paper Mountain: Burning PrettyBrooke R. Bussehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-69349164887178771342012-04-05T16:59:44.382-05:002012-04-05T16:59:44.382-05:00Thank you, Angela. ^^ I had some trouble with the ...Thank you, Angela. ^^ I had some trouble with the words in this poem. I wanted them to flow in a soft way, but I kept getting harsh sounds. I was, however, finally satisfied with this. I'm glad that you thought it beautiful.<br /><br />And I seriously need to read more poetry.Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-26808447683898832832012-04-04T07:11:47.434-05:002012-04-04T07:11:47.434-05:00Love it, Brooke. It's beautiful.
I have alwa...Love it, Brooke. It's beautiful. <br /><br />I have always love poetry and especially those that are unconventional in design, in rhythm, and cause the reader to really think about the meaning--each interpreting it differently. <br /><br />Well done.Angela Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12488555961691093024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-28979083653045466162012-04-04T00:08:04.560-05:002012-04-04T00:08:04.560-05:00Well, more like Times Square.Well, more like Times Square.Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-42394240182161516712012-04-04T00:07:13.029-05:002012-04-04T00:07:13.029-05:00And that, my friend, is why you're made of awe...And that, my friend, is why you're made of awesome. ;)Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-42944093792275180662012-04-03T12:28:13.173-05:002012-04-03T12:28:13.173-05:00I love how you broke words up. By doing so, it slo...I love how you broke words up. By doing so, it slows you down and makes you think about what's going on. Like everything shattering as if the world were frozen in place and yet the sound continues for an instant as things explode. Dark and lovely...surreal even.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-81554162119820194622012-04-03T05:26:35.774-05:002012-04-03T05:26:35.774-05:00The poem brings a number of questions to mind. I l...The poem brings a number of questions to mind. I like the way it can be interpreted differently by each reader.Michael Horvathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06490946095047002839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-30772217912231718032012-04-03T00:35:09.175-05:002012-04-03T00:35:09.175-05:00Okay, I think the world just ended.Okay, I think the world just ended.Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.com