tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post1033034422655823448..comments2023-10-11T05:06:04.185-05:00Comments on Paper Mountain: StuporBrooke R. Bussehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-60874331839798901602011-07-09T20:53:12.920-05:002011-07-09T20:53:12.920-05:00Like Bess, I read it twice. I feel like the cups ...Like Bess, I read it twice. I feel like the cups stands for more and is a device to explain what else is gong on. Well done!Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-23178818554048468742011-04-19T08:07:17.840-05:002011-04-19T08:07:17.840-05:00Hmmm...what an interesting angle. I had to read th...Hmmm...what an interesting angle. I had to read this twice. I love that you don't get the full picture until the end, and that the subway cup kind of "loses." The play on perspective is very well-done. Great poem!<br /><br />And hi! Thanks for your comment -- it's good to be back :)Bess Weatherbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09873091527596352004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-47800140875104627752011-04-18T20:15:01.992-05:002011-04-18T20:15:01.992-05:00Thank you, Michael. ^^ I've been working on it...Thank you, Michael. ^^ I've been working on it for a few years now so it's good to know that I'm improving.Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8223068889792863979.post-44428951928851975332011-04-18T20:13:46.249-05:002011-04-18T20:13:46.249-05:00I liked this. You have a knack for poetry for sure...I liked this. You have a knack for poetry for sure.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.com